Not Quite Done
Triple Dream
Ian Davisson
I.
(obdurate, spreading out, the day leaks onto the field)
the sun so without a thought without a care approached
& while we settled our legs in the water by the hoopnecked reeds
& it seemed to her the rain would not be coming would pass
(so we can cancel it from each side & we’re told
this is the reverse order of a bridge or there no bridge)
so beckoned & together [we] wandered doubleeyeing the grey moat
counterweighted by the double strength of our hands so i say
last night when the moon wandered into the common space (i want to tell you)
i dreamed i was wearing a woman’s silk bodice peony-patterned
& rocks from her garden greyshaped began falling and
in my rarest voice i called smokesignal words in your direction
clouded by the smokestacks clouded by the industrial arches
& wire-white hands whip up strangle my voice in a strange dark horizon
II.
i go to walk my ,& my while later say to her .
i take my time to ,& to of what laid out here &.
of what laid out here ,being felt called for more
in the meantime ,some time binding & will apply
to me i think ,& think wait thinking
something ,improvised awakened last night
like throwing himself upon a grenade upon titanic grass fields
III.
in the ways
Her mouth opens “A pause, a rose,
“A pause, a rose,
the sum of us
repetition
dreaming of nature
1 Comments:
this ia different from triceratops to me.
less accessible to me but clearly well-crafted.
congratulations.
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