Looks Pretty Good To Me...

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Tuesday, April 03, 2007

From Hunters in the Snow

He picked up his sandwiches and his cookies and slung the rifle

He looked like a cartoon of a person laughing

He just wanted to get out of the goddamned truck

He spread his feet and closed his eyes and leaned his head way back and breathed deeply



He wore a heavy wedding band and on his right pinky another gold ring with a flat face

He heard his heart and felt the flush on his face but he never once stopped

He sat down on a stump and wiped his face

He folded his hands across his stomach



Then he stopped and lay there

He looked into his empty cup

He turned and let the air play over his back

He said. "Frank. Frank."



The clouds were low and heavy-looking and the wind blew in shrill gusts

It sounded like a dry branch cracking. The post splintered along its right side

3 Comments:

At 10:05 PM , Blogger Ryan Downey said...

you write alot of poems.

they are good.

i am not good at blogger critique.

thank you for writing alot of poems.

lets do a triceratops reading.

i will dress up like a pterodactyl.

lots of alcohol.

 
At 6:26 PM , Blogger Ian Davisson said...

I am just happy to get a comment.

Have you recieved Tao's book yet?

Well, how did I get here?

 
At 8:58 PM , Blogger Ryan Downey said...

1. comments are nice.

2. no, have you?

3. I am confused.

 

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